Friday, February 20, 2009

Longer Press Runs, Looking For Busy Work Means Unemployment

2 comments:

  1. Wow, Cindy, a great start! I've heard a lot of this story from you, and would recommend as you expand your book, to hook the reader at the start of each chapter with something truly emotional and vivid. An example might be the wait for that bus, with the temperature so low, the howling wind, the excruciating pain, the walking back and forth. Boil it down to your scariest thoughts the moment death was occurring to you! Interspersing facts and figures with emotion that your readers can relate to will keep them turning the pages.
    Have you ever subscribed to a writers magazine? I have saved a few years' worth of Writers Digest. (After a while the suggestions just get recycled!) Let me know if you'd be interested in borrowing them.
    Writing a book is a great enterprise. I happen to know a terrific editor who lives on 3rd Street, if you're interested! (Yes, you know her.)
    Keep the Pepsi flowing!

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  2. But alas Vegan Goddess, Tickler of the Ivory, Zen Mistress, Generous Bearer of Tasty Home Baked Bread....I am humbled and honored that you should bestow upon me your Divine Wisdom. I beg of you to continue to honor me by your continued readership. By doing so, you will soon discover that the points that make will very likely be topics in future writings.

    I toast you!

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